[ Lalit's editorial skills and some seriously good insights helped make a few random lines a good poem. Thanks for bearing with my incorrect Hindi and random scrawlings and making it a nice readable poem :) ]
khaali dil pe saji sooni khaamoshi hain
khokle waadon se bane lambe raaste hain
laashein bichi hain,
ghav ubharkar naasor bane hain,
jo kahin se teri yaad aayi to
jalti raet main baarish, si kyon hain
aahon ne aawaz di hain
siskiyan karwat badalti hain raat bhar
raat ki maili chaadar ye kahti hain
koi waada ya umeed to nahin
phir bhi aaj dil ko mere
tera hi intezaar sa kyon hain
soone dagar pe ek adhmare ped ki shaaq hain
toote kuch thahake hain, murjhaye kuch lamhe hain
na zindagi ki shor hain yahaan, na maut ki koi aahat
phir bhi ped ki ek hari shaakh pe...
aaj bhi bahar si kyun hain
duniya ki mehfil main,
ruswa hokar meri mohobbat khadi hain
aaoge kabhi tum yahaan,
is baat ka yakeen to nahin
phir bhi teri ek nazar ke liye
ye dil bekaraar sa kyon hain
5 comments:
Aapke gehre vichar padh ke dil pe sunnata chha gaya..
Will only say - NICE!
nice one arpz!!!
would like to see some different shades as well to your poetry
@ Sakshi - lot of Lalit's editing has gone into this :)
@ Lalit - sorry to dissapoint u dude, but most of my poetry has dark shades check out Broken thats dark too ... I just like my poetry when its dank dark and full of blacker emotions - maybe im a schizophrenic Sheesh!
er.....[blinks twice]
i'm late again for ur blogs!!!
huggggggg for the last blog (though i'm not male 25-45........err......35.......)
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